http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nWqMQ26Gqi4
The audience for this video is clearly for high school students like us, because the teacher is funny and charismatic. The teacher taught the lesson in a very attracting and funny way, not too boring or awkward. I understood the lesson very easily and learned some new facts about writing essays like, how important thesis and introduction are. One fact I learned about thesis is that it has to be strong, it can't be "maybe yes" or "maybe no." I also understood that thesis is the statement that answers the questions, which is the topic, in addition, every sentence and word used in an essay should all revolve around the thesis statement.
